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Better than you..
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IP:
not bad bro. ur kinda remindin me of Big L in a few of your lines -> "High degrees of expertise that i be displayin in these keys". you need to work on ya structure tho but this was a pretty decent written. give ya 7.2/10. you got potential just keep on writing and u will improve. peace
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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