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Old 12-05-04, 01:51 AM   #13
Ike
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Voted For: *Troop*

easy win for troop

pretty easy explanation.....troop used more multis in his verse....his punches hit harder and had a couple metaphors in there.....1st bar was nice...hit had as hell.....2nd bar was decent....3rd bar was decent nice personal....4th bar was pretty nice....good job using a comparison

head....1st off your structure was completely fucked...it was hard as hell to read......you didnt use any multis....punches were decent....used a personal or 2 that were decent.....

overall troops verse was just nicer....he used more mutlis...it was more original....his personals were better....metaphors were better....and structure was 20 times better......no hate....just my opinion
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