Voted For: SCIP
Alright. This battle was close and to tell the truth, I had trouble trying to pick a winner. The main reason was that both had some real big flaws in their technique. For starters, can I just say that its not good to use symbols in your text, such as
" / // etc etc.. Its also a big
to number your bars..
I think both of you definatly need to work on punchlines, I did notice one decent attempt at nameplay from dipset, which was:
So nigga dont fool Wit The Clique And Dont fool Wit The Dip
Bcuz Ill Take Ya Left Leg off So All you Can Do Is SCIP//4
If you had of worded that better and made a dope lead up line, then it would of been a good punch. Both of you seemed to use a lot of self glorification in your verses which is also not a good thing with battles.. Self glorification is good with freestyling, but when your in a battle your only aim is to clown the other guy.
SCIP, your lines are really badly stretched dude, that was another thing you needa work on, because what I read there really didnt have any flow.. Try rapping those lyrics to a beat and youll see what I mean..
Anyway, Im voting for SCIP because I feel that his bars had more substance and were more focused.. Both of you need to elevate a lot.. But youll get there.. In the mean time, have a good read of this battle and try to write more like this on your next battle.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=87057
Peace.