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Old 12-05-04, 02:38 AM   #75
DrasticMeasureZ
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Voted For: sabotage

This verse took me a while... but I didn’t flee rapverse
Takes thought preparing lines, all about you wackness
He’s flowing electricity, but if he has power I doubt it
He raps so shocking;. he could cause a power outage
He roles with lesser pedigree yet still thinks he’ll be rich
Roling with the dogs, it’s the closest he gets to a bitch
“Can’t teach old dog new tricks” lets just wait and see
Wont need to play dead… once youve finished with me
Most kids got an alter ego but this kids got an ultra ego
“The building blocks of life” his blocks are just plain Lego
Another council member… must be their worst employee
Sabotage your whole operation, at trying to dickride me
Hes to elusive, cause he rhymes wack so hes unnoticed
The council, their laws to be wack, so this is my protest
^^^^^^^^^^^ FLOW WAS GOOD BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT THAT GOOD DIDNT SENSE ANY HARD PUNCHES NOR PERSONALS FAM........LEARN TO USE THAT BUT GOOD FLOW FAM







Im skilled in this game u just a poor rookie
They say you are what you eat..no wonder you devour pussy

Im dissin you non stop I belong in the hater club
Thinks he’s a con-vicks(kon-vex) cause he jacked a tub of vapor rub*

Periodically line after line
Kon’s gonna beat me? Naw, its all in your mind**

Im beating u forever like they sayin that times broke
The only time youre ever up is when youre waiting on votes

I got ho’s cause kid I jus pop and go
Kon’s seen more de-feats than Dr.Scholls

Ur flow is only sprinkling mine stays thundering
What more do I have to do? Youre already under me***
^^^^^^^^^^^^^LIKED THE CLOSA,,,,,,,,STRUTURE IS KINDA FUCKED NOT THAT GOOD.......EH AND DA FLOW WASNT GOOD EITHER BUT DA PUNCHES WERE GOOD AT-LEAST U HAD PERSONALS IN EACH BAR CHA FEEL ME


CONCLUSION= THIS IS AN WACK BATTLE IN MY EYES

SAB U NEED TO ELEVATE ON FLOW AND STRUTURE CAUSE THAT SHIT WAS FUCKED UP........BUT U HAD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS WHICH WAS GOOD PUNCHES WERE OK BUT DA CLOSA WAS DECENT NICE.



4FIL U HAD FLOW WHICH IS GOOD BUT DA PUNCHES I DIDNT SENSE ANY HARD HITTING ONES.U NEED TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES FAM.........SHIT DIDNT CONNECT........U HAD WORDPLAYS BUT DA PUNCHES KINDA LACKED AND TOO BASIC DIDNT REALLY SEE ANY PERSONALS IN THERE.


I HAVE TO GO WITH SAB CAUSE HE'D REALLY THREW SOME PUNCHES IN THERE AND PERSONALS.......4FIL I DIDNT SENSE ANY PUNCHES THROWN NOR PERSONALS.....U HAD FLOW AND WORDPLAY BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT DECENT TOO BASIC FAM


V-SAB CHEA
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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