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Old 12-05-04, 02:51 AM   #38
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

whoa drastic definitely killed c h a o s

drastic - im not likin the font..but that didnt take away from ur verse..u killed this cat..the vocab was good and u had some punches in there that i was feelin..all of ur rhymes attacked him and that was good..ur structure was good...overall - 7/10


c h a o s - holy crap ur structure is so messed up..ur opener was creative but it didnt really hit..i think lines about cats moms are played out so that really took away from ur verse..not any hard punches or good personals..pretty much a basic verse...overall - 5/10


vote - DrasticMeasurez