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Old 12-05-04, 10:20 AM   #37
streetryda
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wrecker-you had a good verse this was a close battle but you had a messed up structure.......good personals........but usuing a spellin isnt a hard one cuz ppl do tha all the time as slang.......your punches were okay.....coulda came a little hardder with them.......some of ya end's didnt rhyme too well togther and some just didnt pd.......work on that......and dont fill in spaces with .... in ya verse fillers ruin it......

enygma-you came over the top in this battle cuz your punches were wittier............you had a lot of humor in ur verse......the ends of your lines actually rhymed together.......you had better vocab than wrecker as well..........nice perosonal bout spellin......cuz it was even shown that its tru in this battle so it made it all the more harder......good job.......

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honest explained

v/enygma
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