Voted For: XxXtayve
this was a weak battle but i have to say yvonee got it.......
i.e.-aight u had an okay verse.......saw some multis.............your structure was insanely horrid........seriously......that needs some work.......you had okay punches.....ya personal was kinda weak....good attempt tho.......ya flow was good.....try puttin some more complex vocab in there............good job tho no hate
yvonne-aight you came harder with the personals in this battle.........your structure was better if you look at where u lines eneded compared to his............you had stretched lines tho i didnt like that too much but it was good........your punches were good........your flow was better........had a lot of multi's..........coulda had better vocab in this tho......good verse
v/yvonne
reutrn the favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=163144
honest and explained