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Old 12-05-04, 01:27 PM   #10
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From: Bmore, Murderland
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damn son...u messin up a good beat fa real...ya lyrics need improvement..ya beat is way to fuckin loud..and the way u flowed...didnt really go like it should..simple rhymin....maybe re do it..and put some more effort in it..turn the beat down...ya quality is pretty good tho..the wya you can fix the flow on this is write MORE in ya bars...so u wont stop after every line...
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