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Old 12-05-04, 04:18 PM   #15
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Voted For: distilled


Fuck baby cuz I'm tha birdman on this block/
Cuz I'm holdin mo birds than a nigga wit chicken pox/
niggaz with chicken pox hold birds?

And I know MC's that's glad they blind cuz they don't really wanna see me/
And I bet u wish u was blind cuz u don't really wanna see me/
why the hell do you repeat the line twice??

Cuz u a sweet Nigga like a fag wit diabetes/
fags with diabetes are sweet?

This verse confused me.. Don't rhyme a word with itself, it sounds herbish. And only use wordplay if it makes sense. I really can't understand your punches.

distilled
i guess you dissed him more and you had much better flow. Also your punches made sense to me and you didn't keep repeating yourself
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