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Old 12-05-04, 04:48 PM   #21
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Voted For: Mike Hawk

Mike Hawk took this..

I could actually read his verse without getting bored. Your structure was alright but u had some streched lines. I say you got this cuz it made me laugh and i didn't get bored.

Other cats was just boring... Kinda played punches. You could have had some of them hitting way harder and your structure was kinda wierd..

Vote-Mike Hawk

RTF- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=163144
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