Voted For: Mike Hawk
Mike Hawk took this..
I could actually read his verse without getting bored. Your structure was alright but u had some streched lines. I say you got this cuz it made me laugh and i didn't get bored.
Other cats was just boring... Kinda played punches. You could have had some of them hitting way harder and your structure was kinda wierd..
Vote-Mike Hawk
RTF-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=163144