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Old 12-05-04, 04:51 PM   #22
Zeke
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Voted For: Mike Hawk

Mike Hawk:
Alright I Like How The Verse Just Flowed Out...Nice Work..Vocabulary Was Decent And Neat Saw Some Good Words In There...Personals Of Hand Nice...A Little Word In There Over All Vocabulary And Punches Was Nice I Just Didnt Feel The Structure..Although It Was Better Then You Opponents.....8.5/10

Killa:
Okay It Sort Of FLowed Out Good To But Your Structure Wasnt Working On This One Also You Had Lot Of Basic Vocabulary In THis Verse..I Know You Can Do Better Then That Hommie...Punches Was Neat Creative...Used A Little WordPlay...Nice Shit OverAll Your Structure And Vocabulary Held You Back On This One Cozz......8/10

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