Voted For: Rambo
My vote is for Neptunes.
Ya punches were kinda good, but the strcuture was a lil off. I can tell that you rap fast, but this is a text battle, and you may have to switch it up a lil.
Rambo, ya structure was decent, but you gotta step it up. Ya punches were decent at best, and ya personals weren't half way decent. You really gotta step it up.
My vote is for Neptunes
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