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Voted For: PayDay

yo I'll murder this wack cat in my lyricall flows/
god knows I'm only here to make my raps shine & glow/
how you gonna say my wording aint at all hard/
And tell me why yo real mc names a candy bar!/
so remember Mr have your guts layin on the street/
listen payday your wording and ryming skills are weak!/
so don't come ever to me wit shit like like dis^^/
I'll put a slug in your ass con't on it thta I won't miss!!//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES WERE KINDA TOO BASIC IN MY EYES..........ELEVATE ON DEM PUNCHES.

I heard you laugh like “elmo” on crack, while givin yourself ya Own-69 just to Twist Ur Back…1
And how u spread Peanut butter on ya nuts while ya fat ass brother licked it up around ya ass crack…2
While your mom committed “sin” by suckin ya hairless nut sack… (pussy)…3*
Your stomach and tits sway and jiggle like stripper’s doin ass claps…4
Your best friends leave u hangin with over-handed bitch slaps…5
Pleading to them 2 wait up, like u were a paraplegic wishin to do hand claps…6
kEV(olve) from Green, to Make The Scene, but he got scared and pissed his jeans…7
U in the Means (Meens) then has u Sown-Together like Needled Seems (Seams)…8
But see Chubbs isn’t dat ya mother on her knees suckin my dick…9
And I kno u jealous u incest bitch, cause u have 2 fuck family cause u can’t get a real chick…10*
Maybe it’s because ya fuckin head is two times bigger than ya fat body…11
That lil drew didn’t even need cross hairs to lyrically tell how your nobody…12*
With a name meaning Kev “loves strip clubs” when he a preteen…13*
Chubbs’ buyin condoms thinking it will make him look older than he seems…14
But what chick wants a dick that creams faster than a pussy? U mine as well hang ya self from a tree…15
Just because you came out of one(pussy), don’t mean that ya dreams are meant to be…16
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ CHEA U HAD LOTS OF PUNCHES DECENT ONES SOME WERE PLAYED SOME WERE GOOD, FIX YA STRUTURE FAM......MESSING UP DA FLOW

OVERALL= MIND- YA PUNCHES WERE TOO BASIC U HAD GOOD FLOW,BUT DA PUNCHES WAS TOO BASIC NOT HARD......

PAYDAY I HAVE TO GO WITH HIM HE HAD SOME PLAYED OUT LINES BUT HE HAD SOME GOOD PUNCHES...FIX YA FLOW FAM.
MIND YA PUNCHES WERE PLAYED, PAYDAY CAME HARD WITH THEM PUNCHES SO I VOTE FOR PAYDAY CHEA