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Old 08-04-02, 07:23 AM   #5
Remy Royalties
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"Sadness Is Laughing In Tha Sullen Faces On This Fast Train..
On This Journey To No-Where, Our Final Destination Is Life..
Stride Over Tha Gap, So I Can Be Gone From This Tyrant Device..
Tha Trangression Of Law Is Clockwise, Felons Escape On Anti..
360 Degrees Of Blasphemy, Illegal Entering Of A Shanty.."

^^ nice shit here.. ..my favorite bars as well.. ..

"Tha Margin Is Dotted And Is Mis-Seen And Always Overstepped..
Immortals Collect In This Final Round Of Sudden Death..
Shaking My Head As I View These Companies Not Breaking Even..
Liabilities Tha Real Culprit Thats In Your Cupboard Thieving.."

^^ liked these lines as well.. ..

"Peasants Grieving Over Conflicts With Other Destitutes..
Interfering Villagers Are Tha Ones Who Think "I'll Rescue You"..
But Get In Your Way And Expand Tha Situation, Making It Worse..
Trying To Put Into Action Tha Passages They Heard In Church.."

^^ example of how good tha flow was in some parts.. ..it was in my opinion, then again everybodys flow is different so it depends upon tha emcee.. ..

"Opposite A Senile Clutching A Single Barrel Relaxing In A Chair..
His Frozen Stare, Made Tha Increase In My Walking Pace..
My Thought In Trace Is Mis-Laid By Tha Babel Of A Victim Of Mace..
Duck Proceedure Due To Tha Gunshots Vibrating Through Tha Air..
Tha One That Makes Contact Is Always Tha Person Who Doesnt Care..
As I Reach My Terminus Building, Through Human Picket Fences..
Add To Diary "This Has Been Another Day In Tha Life Of N-Demik".."

^^ another favorite, closin lines were nice.. ..overall this was tight, keep it up


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