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mess with me get cooked
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AIGHT..............I FELT YOUR EMOTIONS.......FLOW WAS GOOD..........VOCAB NEEDS WORK THOUGH............7/10 WORK ON DEM VOCABS
lost feelings form awkwardness
and this is where im endin all of this
take a look at what you've dont to me
you gave me hope but stole it suddenly
all because it was nothin but a lost cause
my life is crumbling with these neverending flaws
^^^^^^^^^ GOOD CREATIVITY AND SOME META'Z
KEEP DROPPING 7/10 WORK ON DEM VOCABS
ADD SOME MORE META'Z...IMAGINARY................CHEA
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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.
Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.
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SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~! 
P.S.A
COMING SOON- GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW -THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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