"tried to help you through ya gurl that lying hoe...
tried to give you my hand when you were falling but either you didnt care or you didnt kno......"

^^ liked that, felt it right off tha bat.. ..

"these past few days i look for your name and its simply gone..
Slow n steady rins the race...with you seems we set our own pace
two years of boredom talk...seems t obe earsed like day old chalk
the board is black without you in my threads.."

^^ all emotion here, shows what ya feelin nah mean.. ..good shit.. ..

"so many times i thought n wondered if i lived closer would i be ya gurl?then realized that freinds is our main title...nurse hazy to the rescue..."

^^ liked this as well.. ..

"your a shining star boy im not gonna be th eone to stop you from glowing......
and as this distance gros so much farther..and times for you get so much harder.....remember you can call upon me......
for love fate hope or destiney.....
empathy..."

^^ my favorite part, tha closin lines did it for me.. ..nice poem ma, keep writin


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