k from wat u have i want everyones help plz no hate!! heres a rap i used to diss some one tell me wat i need to elavate on the most and rate everything!!!!

sayin nigga when your ass is probably white
bitch u aint shit when im done with u u think uve seen da light
like i say all u got is gay faggot jokes
im so good makin soljas to have strokes
callin me a ho
when u need bettah flow
my metapores are stronger then your punches
as i say again im da bully takin pussies lunches