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Old 12-06-04, 05:28 AM   #47
Dex
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Voted For: ..Lyrical..

No contest...

open: string did take this tho, "eh yo, u against me, its a pitiless effort
a forensic team couldn't find a win on ya record"

close: definately lyrical, "You spit basic…left this kid wasted…but tha breathalyzer said sober…
Not to mention this whole site went to shit…cuz of you…in October…"

String's structure; i know you said it was deliberate but it was quite weak in my opinion, seemed all over the place there bro. There wasnt really a great deal of vocab either and personals were lacking. Some funny punches tho, a couple of them landed.

Lyrical; had a real good verse, packed with vocab, multi's, personals and a good flow and structure. I was definately feeling this.

Unlucky string, your verse would have beaten someone worse than lyrical
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