Voted For: GKillaz05

GKillaz05

Call yourself a dopehead cuz you rep my pic on your hat...
But when you spit you sound 'whack' like a baseball bat...
(DOPE OPENER...WORDPLAY GOOD...MULTIE USE...FLOWED...9/10)

I'll put my gat in your mouth so you can spit a solid bar...
I rise like the sun... got you runnin' like your a solar car...
(NICE FLOW, PUNCH, WORDPLAY...8/10)

That line shut you up dont interupt you'll sound dumber...
Your only spitten hot shit becuz I hired you as my plumber...
(LMAO...NICE DISS HERE...FLOWED GOOD AS WELL...9/10)

JaeBurnz is unwanted his rhymes are foreign like egyptians...
No way ima lose this, battlin' Mr. Burns from The Simpsons...
(HAHA...DECENT BAR HERE...FLOWED AIGHT...CREATIVE...8/10)

Movin Slow-Mo Im runnin' you over in my John Deer tractor...
Im leavin ya scared to battle me... like im your fear factor...
(LMAO...KILLED HIM WITH THIS BAR...NICE PUNCH, PERSONAL, MULTIE USE...AND FLOWED WELL...9/10)

YOUR FLOW WAS AWSOME...STRUCTURE GOOD...YOU USED NICE WORD PLAY, VOCAB GOOD...PUNCHES WERE EVERYWHERE...YOUR FIRST AND LAST BARS COULD HAVE KILLED HIM ALONE...MY ONLY SUGGESTION TO YOU IS TO NOT PUT ... THESE IN YOUR VERSE...IT MAKES IT LOOK KINDA NOT WE THOUGHT IF THAT MAKES SENSE...OTHER THAN THAT MAYN...IT WAS FIRE...YOU GOT MY VOTE...


JaeBurnz354

Why even accept this battle knowing you won't win...
I'm on another level so meet my balls, they both twins/
(DECENT OPENER I SPOSE...PLAYED OUT...NOT PUNCHES....6/10)

Treat ya neck like springs they way I jump on you...
So if my rhymes garbage, I'ma let a whole lot dump on you/
(DECENT BAR, BUT STILL NOT GOOD HIT...BE MORE CREATIVE...6/10)

My flow is complicated and it stay stumping fags...
Look nigga you open for shots like a punching bag/
(KINDA SELF GLORIFACATION, BUT U MADE THIS BAR WORK IN A WAY...GOOD FLOW WITH IT...YOUR BEST BAR I THINK...7/10)

You swinging for punchlines to connect but you missing...
I got that sick flow why you think ya stomach twisting/
(NICE FLOW, AND TOPIC BUT ITS NOT A DISS OR PUNCH...6/10)

10 lines is all I need to rip you like meat off chicken bones... Don't Throw punches, cuz i'm the wonr one to be hitting on/
(I KNO WHAT YOU MEAN WITH THAT BAR, BUT IT DIDNT END ON FLOW, AND AGAIN NO PUNCH, DISS, MULTIE....NOTHING...WEAK CLOSER...6/10)

AIGHT MAYNE...YOU HAVE AN AIGHT VERSE, I AM NOT SURE HOW EXPERIENCED THAT YOU ARE, BUT IN A BATTLE THE OBJECTIVE IS TO STR8 UP DISS THE DUDE YOU ARE STANDING AGAINTS...YOU NEED TO WORK ON BEING MORE RAW, AND BEING MORE CREATIVE...TRY NOT TO MAKE URESELF SOUND SO GOOD, AND TOUGH...LET YOUR WORDS DO THAT FOR YOU...YOU AINT GOT TO PROVE NOTHING TO ANYONE HERE EXCEPT YOURSEFL...I MEAN YOU HAVE SOME TALENT, BUT MAYBE BATTLING ISNT YOUR FORTAY...I THINK WRITING OPEN MICS AND SHIT ARE...ANYWAYS, ELEVATE SOME, AND TRY AGAIN...

MY VOTE GOES TO GKillaz05...*NUFF SAID*

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