Voted For: blackwell

HAMMER

I couldn’t scratch a sketch, he’s ugly as sasquatch
I saw mickey mouse wearing a blackwell wristwatch
(WEAK OPENER, BUT FUNNY, AND THE FLOW WAS OFF...5/10)

what other way you in this, I wont let you feel excluded
He gets batteries for Christmas with “toys not included”
(LMMFAO....BEST BAR OF YOUR VERSE...YOU STR8 UP DISSED HIM ON THIS ONE...LMAO...9/10)

Couldn’t wait all week for a piece of Blackwell critique
indeed hes bleak, not unique, silly rhymes are antique.
(UMM DECENT I GUESS...WEAK FLOW, BUT GOOD USE OF VOCAB...6/10)

An ugly lonely guy, tries for pussy and gets a very rare bit
Except from all the groupies, come with puncture repair kits!
(WEAK CLOSER...IF YOU REWORDED THAT IT WOULD HAVE BEEN FIRE...FOR EXAMPLE...

HE TRIES FOR PUSSY WHEN HE AN UGLY BITCH SO HE IS GETTIN A RARE BIT//
TALKIN SHIT, FUCKIN GOUPIES WHOS PUSSIES COULDN’T BE REPAIRED WITH FLAT TIRE KITS//

YOU WOULD HAVE KILLED HIM IF IT WAS SOMETHING LIKE THAT...


BLACKWELL

Ayo he's gets grilled everytime so thats y he cums fried
i dun need ta tie knots in his tounge...as his record got him tounge-tied
(DECENT OPENER, NICE FLOW...7/10)

n talking bout his record......his wins are neal
u obviusly aint hot so y does ya sig represent springville
(DECENT PUNCH AND FLOW WAS OK...COULD BE BETTER...6/10)

Ya rhymes aint shit so i guess u got da rite ta fuss
thinks his a gangster but his prolly like his sig..drives a bus
(NICE BAR HERE...DECENT PUNCH ON HIS SIG...7/10)

Only lunatics could claim that ya raps are ill
this like confused buisnessmen as ya gunna loose n thats the deal
(PLAYED OUT...IF REWORDED IT COULD WORK...5/10)

N I'd probaly cry wit laughter if i saw u in a bandanah
u aint as hards as nails.......so y call yaself hammer?
(DECENT CLOSER...NICE DISS ON HIS NAME...GOOD PUNCH WITH THE HARD AS NAILS...WORD PLAY IS WEAK, AND FLOW IS OK...7/10)

AIGHT MAYNE...YOU VERSE WASNT BAD, BUT YO...YOU NEED TO FULLY TYPE YOUR WORDS...DONT HALF ASS SHIT...TRY NOT TO SLANG YOUR SHIT, BECAUSE NOT EVERYONE CAN FLOW IT...WE ARE THE ONES VOTING SO FIX THAT...IT ALSO MAKES IT CONFUSING TO READ, AND YOU HAVE TO READ 2 TIMES TO UNDERSTAND...YOUR STRUCTURE WAS OKAY...COULD WORK ON THAT SOME...YOU HAD DECENT PUNCHES, PERSONALS, SOME MULTIE USE, AND THE WORD PLAY NEEDS TO BE ELEVATED...BE MORE CREATIVE AND YOU WILL DO GOOD...SO YOU GET MY VOTE...

VOTE/BLACKWELL

RETURN THE VOTE IN MY BATTLE AGAINTS LIL CHUBBS...LINK IN THE SIG...~1~

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