FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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Voted For: WeeDex
Lil-Youngstah
This kat think he a vet...with a name like Weedex?
He spits like he "Stutta"...cause he Spittin "Speed-Text"
(DECENT OPENER...NICE MULTIE USE AND FLOW WAS GOOD...7/10)
Look at This Kid...thinkin *This motherfucker's Poppin*
Though He DickRidin...This foo For apples he be Bobbin
(NICE PUNCH AND MULTIE USE...7/10)
Look I got Ya now...Like if I'm havin ya Like *Hipnoticz*
This Kat needs a Lesson on da "A-b-c's"...He needs "Hooked-on-Phonix"
(KINDA PLAYED, BUT DECENT...FLOW WAS OKAY...STRUCTURE WAY OFF...6/10)
Now I'ma Leave ya Lyrically Dead...Just like *Da Rip*
Step-on-da-Mic... and I'll leave ya Lyrically Ripped
(NICE WORD PLAY, WEAK CLOSER THO...FLOW WAS AIGHT...6/10)
YOUR VERSE WASNT BAD, IT JUST LACKED A FEW THINGS...YOUR STRUCTURE NEEDS WORK...DONT BE SO SLOPPY...YOUR FLOW WAS OKAY, SOME SPOTS WERE CHOPPY...OVER ALL IT WAS OKAY
WeeDex
Lil youngsta, the true playboy to the ladies, a real funksta
Thumbs up to this numb-nuts, as a baby was found in a dumpsta
(DECENT OPENER...I LIKE THE FLOW AND HIDDEN MEANING BUT MULTIPLE PUCH USE....CREATIVE...8/10)
Check this, he don’t neglect his wrists over his respect list
I cant resist to correct this and spit to give you an erect dick
(LMAO...SHIT IS GOOD...FLOW GOOD, PUNCHES GOOD...YOUR WORDPLAY IS GOOD...YOUR DISSIN HIM MULTIPLE TIMES IN ONE LINE WITH ONE MEANING...9/10)
Weedex, your new favourite idol, icon and overall champ
Lil Punksta cant do any elevating, hes disabled, needs a ramp
(FIRST LINE PLAYED...REMEMBER WHAT I SAID...BUT YOU MADE IT WORK WITH THE SECOND LINE...THAT DISS WAS DECENT...U COULD CALL THAT A MULTIE...DISABLED, AND NEEDS A RAMP....FLOWED WELL AS WELL...8/10)
In fact the times wasted and you shouldn’t have bothered
Your shits got as much flow as a toilet and Danny Glover!
(WEAK CLOSER...GOOD FLOW, TOPIC WAS OKAY...AND DANNY GLOVER...LMMFAO...JUST THAT ALONE MAKES THIS BAR HOT...8/10)
YO...YOUR FLOW WAS ALL THERE...STRUCTURE WAS GOOD...I LIKE HOW YOU USED THE MEANINGS OF WORDS TO GET HIM MULTIPLE TIMES ALL AT ONCE...NO ONE DOES THAT ANYMORE...YOUR USE OF METAS WAS GREAT...WITH THAT MAN, YOU GET MY VOTE ONCE AGAIN...GOOD JOB...
VOTE/WEEDEX IT WAS JUST WAY BETTER IN A SENSE YOU CAN UNDERSTAND HIS VERSE...GOD SHIT
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"I didnt choose this life, this life chose me"
EveryDay Its the same old song, and the feeling is always gone
HONOR and RESPECT
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