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Old 12-06-04, 11:16 AM   #13
Class.Sic
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From: 91Sickness
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Voted For: Nasdaq

Emcee:Nasdaq

Verse:
Holding knifes, That'll make you "draw blood", just to "illustrate your life"
My word play is nice, but you and your words just create more strife
-------------was aiight
I make it so complicated compared to your lines, a just a fine difference is
Fakes get so decimated and scared with my lines, I bust rhyming sentences
----------------nice
And the bar I just dropped has popped your pupils “Who the hell is this kid?”
And by far I just topped to the top of peoples mind as I do it again!
----------------wtf?
Ate this dude like a snack, I was disappointed but now its funny your wack
And by the way you react your surprised that I drop bombs in verbal attacks
---------------meh
Your chances are through, its safe to say I am the greatest and skilled too
Because when the girls say “you well hung” they talk about how I killed you
---------------aiight

Comments:not bad work on vocabulary

Marks:
Wordplay - 6/10
Metas - 5/10
Vocabulary - 4/10
Structure - 7/10
Punches - 6/10
Opener - 7/10
Closer – 5/10
Personals – 5/10
Enjoyment – 6/10
Creativity - 5/10
Overall -51/100
----------51%


Emcee:Big-Scoot

Verse:
Nasdaq was on his way up til he fucked wit a higher power/
Now I'mma send his stock crashin like the fuckin twin towers/
------------aiight personal
Dream Team General givin financial advice/
1 times 2 lil nigga you had betta think twice/
------------fake, you aint no dreamteam general
Cuzz I'm nice wit tha flow and you just ...aight/
------------no..

Comments:work on everything...you suck

Marks:
Wordplay - 0/10
Metas - 0/10
Vocabulary - 0/10
Structure - 0/10
Punches - 0/10
Opener - 0/10
Closer – 0/10
Personals – 0/10
Enjoyment – 0/10
Creativity - 0/10
Overall -0/10

i post 0s because there is no point telling you..

Overall: nasdaq wins because he was the better textcee...
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