alrite this was quite a gud battle here...

indeph - nice verse, ya related ya story to some interestin topics, flow was gud n you had some nice multis in there, nice emotion too....liked

drastic - i was surprised to how gud this was dawg didnt know u cud write topically, ya flow n structure were off in places but generally gud...gud emotion n gud imagary but i think u were just outclassed on this occasion, nice dawg but just keep elevatin...

v/indeph

props to both

can y'all hit mine n i.mind's battle...thx

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