Voted For: ..::Climax::..

G-Ride Bouncer

climaz ill knock ya head of with a axe
shit ill burn ur rhymes they mad of wax
(WEAK OPENER...SO SIMPLE..5/10)

shits so weak water cud break um
fake um time to break shake um
(URE JUST RHYMIN...NO PUNCHES OR MULTIES...4/10)

ill wont stop until u black n blue
i murked this newb hes weak i dont give a poo
(WEAK WEAK CLOSER...NOT EVEN FUNNY...4/10)

THIS WAS A WEAK VERSE MAN...NO HATE...BUT ALL YOU DID WAS FLOW...YOU HAD NO PUNCHES, META, MULTIES, DISSES...NOTHING...ELEVATE MAN...ELEVEATE


CLIMAX

He's a sure success....... at failure, and he aint never gonna be ill
I here coments that he flows well....only cuase his career aims down hill
(DECENT OPENER...FLOW OKAY...NO REAL GOOD PUNCH...6/10)

This dick ride bouncer.... its on his was to the hall of shame
mate you couldnt elevate, If you were on an escalater playing you game
(DECENT FLOW, OKAY DISS...USE BETTER WORDPLAY...6/10)

He cant be straight spiting...... cause he's sucked cocks in many caces
only ill shit that cums from his mouth is the sperm traces...
(OKAY CLOSER...YOUR BEST BAR...KIND OF PLAYED AND STRUCTURE IS OFF...7/10)

YO...YOUR VERSE WASNT BAD, BUT IT WASNT GREAT...IT IS AN AVERAGE BATTLE VERSE...YOU NEED TO BE MORE CREATIVE WITH YOUR WORDS AND STR8 UP DISS THAT DUDE...YOUR FLOW WAS AIGHT...STRUCUTRE WAS KINDA OFF....ELEVATE SOME, AND ULE B GOOD

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