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Old 12-06-04, 04:39 PM   #6
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I let flows pop off the top of my head...like kettle korn/
you the type of nigga that pop off boners...to your favorite porns/
ok...

i'm a odd nigga...so fuck gettin even im a just settle the score/
I dont know why you battleing me kid cuase like...vigins your not ready/
dont rhyme....

im a leave your heart torn to peacies...like papper confetti/
ill inbed you in a coffin like...gardeners plant flowers/
ok punch but dont rhyme...

or i might just watch you fall to my knees...like the twin towers/
you a coward and listening to you is rediculus/
WTF??? weak......

and me on the other hand im so sick wit this...you think id have hiv or ciphalus/
there aint no need for you to hang man...the outcome of this battle its gonna be ashame man/
1st line good 2ed weak as fuck and dont rhyme....

its official man you I think you at the end of your rope/
change your name to assclown...cuase its appaent you a joke/
......

all this rapping in my blood cant you tell its what i thrive/
your name make you a faggot so if i was you i get my tubes tied/
what???.......lame

whoever told you you was gonna beat i could of told you lied/
you better off not even postin your reply/

the only bar that really rhyme but sadly it had no punch and it was the ending only........

u need to elevate kid work on ya punches flow was ok but all around u need some elevating... 5.0

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hang-man

its to easy playin off ya name, lets com-pair-it
to how hard u act but ya dick as big as my pubic-hair-is
danm way better start.... decent punch/diss

ya flow is straight up care-less, dog im gonna win
my punch come double-up, knocking u out like siamie-twis
ok decent...

u to weak in the street, N a hand full of pebbles couldnt make u a HARD-ROCK
the way i bust-off-the-dome, like im pullin till ya skull-cocked
i felt what u was trying to say int he 2ed line but re-word it to make it hit harder... decent...

16 line is fine, like O.D.B in hes prime
WHY u speeding to rap, when the only ticket u'll get.. is a fine
haha preety funny.....

i talk that raw shit, u talk that saw shit
u'll have to kill a chick'en N skin it, inorder to have a RAW-FLIP
not 2 bad...

i spit street life, as if i directed the script
i'll leave u all RED, like rock'in alt-falcons with matching flags down a block of crips
streched......

i dont need chips to have a meal, dog my stomch stay full
and u'r the only TEXTCEE, who collect gangsta rap pic to act hood N play-cool
ok....

dog my flow dirt, like a un-clean-pool
and da heat that i pack, i'll elvaporate this slob-drwal
ok...

its ova im done with my freestyle, lyrical beat-down
and i got more body-BAGS, then a 24 hour C-TOWN BITCH
oo nice ending....

all around good drop... a few good punches a few weak lines good flow, creativeness was good and original not bad....

vote: hang-nuts i mean men...