feelin dis - i reckon wud make a gd trak if u added anuva verse and a chorus - and u cud get like a femcee 2 spit on it wud b dope - was feelin vocab was on high level, structure worked and u stayed on theme wud have been betta a bit longer and mo imagery - tight drop - keep em comin - overall 8.5/10 - peace 1

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