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Old 12-06-04, 06:31 PM   #19
Wickedclown
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Voted For: A.K.A.

aight yall good battle here.... breakdown:

AKA... good verse dawg.. flow was good, structure was ok even tho one of ya lines was a bit on the stretched side... punches hit pretty well but the personals were pretty much on lock! for a little 10liner this was a good verse, creative and to the point, would have liked to see some multis tho.......
6/10

Marshal.... aight ya verse was ok too, flow was off in some points but was ok for the most part, structure needs work, needs to be evend out.... punches and personals hit but some didnt hit hard enough, creativity was aight... again would have prefered to see some multis but overall 4.5/10

aight yall good battle from both of yall but AKA takes this one... no hate to marshal just elevate and you will get there........

VOTE- AKA............