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Old 08-04-02, 05:28 PM   #3
IllLyricalthaDon
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Unhappy get offa niggas dick

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ay son dont hate cuz ya rhymes are faded, spittin ya shit fake like gold plated, nigga you cant comprehend my rhymes x-rated, get off my dick son i already masterbated...

now...befo you go jumpin on my dick you need ta recognize...

first issue...tha historically part...look after words...im sayin im historically tha illest rippin it inanely (silly - for tha stupid people)...secondly you need ta recognize tha use of vocab son cuz you jus weak...my shit made sense unlike yours...

secondly...tha unbelievably...itz called settin it up...tha line should read "i spit it so fast itz unbelivable"...but by adding on tha -ly youre setting up for a change of tense and "motion" in your rhyme...poetry 101 for tha stupid people like dis kat...

and thirdly...Kurt Kobain blew his head off...maybe if you watched tha news more...or read a paper?...tha next line i said i wuz gonna blow ya head off...OH MY GOD WHAT A CONCEPT!...KURT KOBAIN BLEW HIS HEAD OFF, AND I USED HIM AS A HELPER NOUN TO MY STATEMENT IM GONNA BLOW YA HEAD OFF...

finnaly...i said fo you not to hate...son even if you wanted ta hea somma my audio i wouldnt waste my time...obviously you got your feelings hurt because your shit was whack and made no sense...and you cant face tha facts...put simply...GET OFF MY DICK KID!...1
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