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Old 12-06-04, 07:09 PM   #21
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From: Trenton 609|look me up bitch
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Wicked: tip for your style k.i.s.s. keep it simple stupid. even thought it looks ok it kinda annoying. why you broke it up into two verse i got no clue. the rhyme sceme was a little off but vocab was good.there were some wack lines but most hit. i liked the personals better then the punches.there were some mults but they were kinda weak. i think you need to work on wordplay but overall nice drop

lil cali: first and formost that was the worst flow i ever seen you were all over the place. second there were alot of wack lines and i don't think any punches hit. i thought that your style was good but what was with (s) after heart attack. don't do that shit anyway. personals were there but were common.
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