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Old 12-06-04, 09:48 PM   #11
*GHOSTE*
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This was feedback posted for 50Cent_MurderInc

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this battle was hella short...

multies: no1
wordplay: 50
punches: 50
flow: 50
structure: 50
metas: 50

parallels punches were hella played...*MICHAEL JACKSON*...
his flow was off a little...but u can never get flow exactly how its meant to be when u read it...n e way...both good structure...
both need elavation...but i think yall both got potential...

best line: Maybe he's good....kids just pulling our rope
He was quoted in Mike Hawk's sig...he must be dope
^^^only because i hate mike hawk

worst line: Herbs hopeless.....just searchin for e-nookie
Bitch cant be tough...I mean he beefs with a cookie
^^^wtf...


ne way...hay 50...thx for sayin i need elavation when i even said it was gonna b basic...obviously the guy has a reading problem...lmfao...

but u took this 1 honestly...


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