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this battle was fuckin weak.... but adapt took it
Devine - i dunno if you could have used a more simpler rhyme scheme.... brain/pain/ blah... WACK wasn't feelin it at all.... flow was off... multis were a lil there but nothin serious... seemed half assed to me.... and in your punch time shyt... you were talkin about yourself half the lines
"Im the attacking tiger and i heard yah girl........."
"Im notorious at gay bashing and 'revealing your ......."
"Im into 'Roc-A-Fella' fashion and i 'hit close to home......."
I,I,I don't think those I lines are punches...just cuz you throw garbage wordplay like web-spiders shyt.... i'm sorry but i didn't feel you verse at all.... and i aint about to sugar coat shyt.... you started to heat up at the end.... but no punches stood out to me....
adapt - get off the illa noise shyt.... its seriously been played for like 2 years.... i saw a lot of played lines in ya verse....
"devine lost focus, when i stole your fucking ford-car."
"ya mine as well "get the neuse". adapt'll be cool and let ya hang with this."
but you did make an attempt to throw punches and be creative about it.... your verse was put together better and wasn't as choppy structure even though you were pushin it flow wise.... this battle was not impressive.... throw some fuckin personals for chirst sake.... wordplay..... metaz..... i know or hope yall didn't go all out on these verses.....
vote - adapt
peaz....
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