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Old 12-07-04, 05:18 AM   #15
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noonesiller
 
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Voted For: (x) CeEd

my vote has got to go to x..... better use of vocab and bars were well structured..... jmsbnd.... you came pretty weak here... there is lots of room for improvement.... but stil both verses were pretty deep.... x i liked this shit..
"In Baslam 5 kids are injured and 2 are asleep"
^^that was a nice concept there... keep it up man
jmsbond not bad..... but get rid of this shit
Im writing these lyrics to make...... blah.... thats just herbishness.....
nuff said..... peace

Removed.. already voted once