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Old 12-07-04, 11:14 AM   #18
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Who the fuck is this newb? d so shit ill be defeatin him simply
Really who has a chance against me when their merk list is empty?
decent

I'll merk this kid, and take his style and melt him in sec's
What kinda good MC can't even spell the word "respect"?
thats aight...
This is really a sad story kill this faggot till he cant even get up
Pussy, i've had better punches than you in my god damn set ups
WHAT?

How does it make you a man when you come at me wit a alias dude?
So I found out....whoever makes garbage ass sigs is probably you
kinda funny..

And I mean do I really have to point how whack you really are?
What type of dope textcee thinks 15 lines would make even bars?
haha now thats funny N a good one...

Kid's shakin in his boots and still pleading for me not to duck
You melt whack MC's?guess it's time for you to self-destruct
aight...

I'll grapple your spleen and then slowly rearrange you face
Where he lay's his hats his home....next to a tin can and guitar case!
it could of been a better ending but ok...

all around not a bad verse a few decent bars one or 2 i wasnt feeling but all around but bad 7.5/10


Kid Your Another Mythical One...................Thinking Your Skill Is Real??
Call Him Prometheus Coz I Fished Him Out So How You Keeping It Real??*
1st line good 2ed ok could of been better...

Wan' Play Socrates.........That's Good Nigka Coz I'm Playing Zeus........
A Myth For A Name........A Great Wonder....What Are You Obtuse????...
decent...

Your A Plain Simple Actor In My Verse.............The Main Character......
In The Case Of Battling Some One Like Me Fear Is Your Worst Factor..
i like the flow on this, preety good...

You Seek Attention With That Greek Name....What A Weak Name.....
I'm Relevant To Authentic Intelligence Coz I Wan' You Slain.......
nah really feeling this... but o.k

Theres An End To All Fairy Tails......And It's Right About Now...
I've Knock Your Tooth Out And Added To My Record A Knock Out...
could of been a better ending....


well u had a couple decent lines slightly better flow, but both of ya ending was preety weak..... none the less not a bad verse... 8.0/10