Rastafari Walk Tall
From: East London, (Hackney) |
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IP:
nice drop man..................was feelin:
My Heart Scathed & Scarred, From The Emotional Stress And Abrasion's,
Reminding Myself Of The Day My Father Underwent His Fatal Operation,
I Never Got To Utter My Final Word's In Company Of His Presence,
Introduced To My Father 5 Month's Ago, Have Nothing To Reminiscence,
dis was tightes part of drop - not sure if u goin wit da wordplay on "Reminiscence" cos its dnt work in dat context or u jus fed up, lol
Shit was tight especially if jus a freestyle
Get yo vocab on
Structure was fine
Overall - 8/10
Return tha favour on:
my battle wit REALISTIK - link in sig
Peace fam
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