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Voted For: Sticky Bandit
this battle sucked overall
Terror2005: way to basic, try using multies and ya structure was off
u couldnt beat me if i was "wackestrapper" and u was "onemanband"//
bitch da most money u will ever have is in ur "rappers" hand//
way to basic, punch was able to hit though
I throw shots at emcees like targets from long ranges//
You thought you could 'switch' ya style up by listening to 'changes'//
better then the first, feeling this but could have been better
take blades to ya gums, so you can have bloody flosses//
only thing that "sticks" to this "bandit" is continuous losses//
first line was blah...second line was ok
u need to go home and get hooked on phonics cuz ur illiterate//
if u really think ur bout to win dis battle u might as well jus forget it//
don't ever end a battle with a line that basically say "oh it's over"
could have been alot better, elevate, no hate
StickyBandit: pretty good shit, fell off towards the end though
Listen...You Couldn't Be Tight If Your Ass Hole Was A Virgin..
Pebto Bismo Couldn't Help Ya Congestion System Nor A Surgeon
liked this, was good and hit kinda hard
It Would Be A Miracle If You Came With Lyrical Scriptures...
But Your Another Big Dreamer As Walt Disney's Pictures.....
i can't even tell u how played rhyming scriptures and pictures is, don't ever use the word lyrical unless ya doing audio, wasn't feeling this
I'm An Advantage Over You Like Regular To Florescent Light Fixtures
I'll Have You Feeling More Steal Then Air Planes With Titanium..
Lyrics Will Hit Ya Dome....Cozzing A Fold In Your Cranium...
u should have had something else to rhyme with fixtures cause it made the rhyme scheme uneven, hit but not that hard
overall i think u feel off at the end but it was still enough to over power terror and to terror don't space ya bars and use the slashes at the end of ya lines like that
vote = Sticky Bandit
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