Lyrics were cool on this one, but you need to even out the vocal level a little. In the beginning you were kinda speaking soft....then you got a little louder...then softer again. Try to keep your voice at the same level throughout the whole song. It also sounded a little too echoey to me, just didn't give your voice a crisp sound.....I think you would be better off without the echo. Anyway, the shit was cool flow wise and lyrical wise, I just think the first two areas I mentioned could be worked on a little

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