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Old 08-04-02, 09:38 PM   #11
Loggix
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I deleted a lot of the votes that won't count,and kept the posts about the biting because it could be useful in the future...........now to the battle......

When it comes to flow,I would say Adapt took it,both went a little rough at times,but here is a break down....

Quote:
Devine Visonary
Spitting flames…programmed to maim…directed at ya torso…to leave flesh dripping from your frame…
Feel the strain…as I infiltrate ya veins..travel through each passage and disconnect the brain…
It's devastating pain…in this torture game…DNA splits like atoms as your blood gets drained…
Experience the wrath…as you see my spirit pass…extract ya spinal chord and slice your mass in half…


He had a lot of multies in his verse,which helped it flow,but the rhyme scheme was way too basic,as compared to Adapts,thats were Adapt comes stronger...

Quote:
Adapts
faggot.. devine-visionary look at him dickryde-me, you sad exscuse of an-emcee.
its true i bless-the-mic, ignite-the-knight with skill in the midst of a-mic-fight.
you TEXTcee.. only time you write essays.. is when you scribe your-homeboys!!
you fucking-toy. visionary could rep. my location.. and still not make illa-noise!
boy.. only time your up-to-par, is when your dyslexic and on your favorite-RAP-star![ohshit]
fight-hard, and pull-cards. devine lost focus, when i stole your fucking ford-car.


Not much better in those first lines,but a more complicated
structure,thats what gave him a stronger flow....

Now look at the wordplay....
Quote:
Devine
Unable to be beat…so pay attention as I speak…I'll make you eat your verse, just so you can taste defeat…


That is one of your better lines,which their isn't much wordplay in your verse,or any that hits hard anyways....

Quote:
Adapt
fight-hard, and pull-cards. devine lost focus, when i stole your fucking ford-car.
and beat you with a telescope.. till visionarys left seein-stars!


Adapts wordplay was mixed with some personals,and general wordplay through out the verse,as for Devine,they were mixed with fillers,which made the punches not hit hard...So adapt took it their....

Now punches
Quote:
Devine
Unable to be beat…so pay attention as I speak…I'll make you eat your verse, just so you can taste defeat…
Your futures fucking bleak…as I creep deep and inject morphine into ya bloodstream to leave you to rot within a week…
Who can last the distance…as my tongue spits like pistons…showering you with acid to burn through your resistance?…


thats what majority of devines punches were like,which made him come weak at times,too much fillers and real basic general punches......

Quote:
Adapt
its just wrong..
that only time you have dope bars.. is when you blow lines at the corner-pub!
you saw my verse and was like.. oh-fuck! clovers waste.. your shit out-of-luck!
your aw-struck. get all-buck-wild. rhyme schemes too ill.. even-YOU-smiled.


Adapt had a more direct punches.....

wordplay=Adapt
Flow=Adapt
punches=Adapt

overall vote=Adapt