Voted For: anxiety
Ok this was a pretty dope topical battle :
Anxiety:
Your verse was almost perfect... The imagery was amazing .. probably the best i have seen on RV.. everything was so descriptive.. your verse also flowed well and that doesnt mean much to some people but i like being able to read a verse and have the words roll of my tongue and thats what your verse did.. wordplay was pretty good... everything stayed consistent... good structure.. you stayed on topic the whole way through... and the ending was pretty good i expected something completely different so a twist at the end definately helped this verse out..
overall : 9.7/10
Nostradamus:
Your verse was also good... but the biggest problem i had with your verse was that i didnt feel like it followed the topic in the first part and halfway through the last part.. i understood where you were coming from when you wrote this but the way that you wrote it deleted all possibility of good imagery.. there were a couple spots where the imagery jumped out but nothing consistent.. you had the better wordplay and flow.. structure was good but i dont think your verse was as good as anxiety's
overall : 9.1/10
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=162611