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Old 12-07-04, 08:32 PM   #3
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blah this battle was wack .. absolutely wack i seen nothing from either verse that jumped out at me

rick: your verse was... well... weak... your structure killed any attempts of dropping a decent punch i could hardly follow half of your verse.. work on keeping the lines around the same length... basically your punches were mediocre and your verse as a whole was basic..

overall :3.2/10

WC: your verse was also wack im glad you didnt use that on me when we battled cuz this was a pitiful attempt at a dope verse.. you had a couple OK punches but everything was basic... and gangsta rap wont work with text on this board try a new style.. throw punches with amazing metaphors.. i guarantee you will win every battle if you elevate out of the gangsta rap genre...

overall: 5.4/10

return the favor on this battle please:

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=162611
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