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Old 12-07-04, 10:25 PM   #10
Crossroads
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Voted For: C-Bo

I gotta say...aight topical battle, but 20 lines is too short...

C-Bo's rhymes, well some of them dont rhyme, but I believe it edged kein's with the vocab and it's incitefulness, both verses flowed just fine and both verse's structure was good. I do think both of you guys can improve on some of the stretched lines though. Overall C-Bo gets my vote with overall a more inciteful verse. Though both of you did a good job.
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