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Old 12-08-04, 04:36 AM   #27
GangsStarShit
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Voted For: Empire

Flows Verse

I dont even like you dawg, your wack.... so fuck A.I i'll fight you all
I like to brawl.. but how you gonna whoop my ass lookin like a white ru-paul
^ Ru-Paul = Played i think u've used before you know

I know this beef means alot to empire, since you only fight with text
to you its war.. but see real people have lives outside the net
^ lol @ this soooo true

so forget Empire i would melt this queer.....he's fucking worthless
stick to facts, shouldnt this cat, be washing clothes and dusting curtains
^ this had me laughin dope punch

Basically Im like the repo man.... youre whole family will fear me kid
You used to want my 2 cents on your verses, now you want 2 cents period
^ punch good but some self-glory blah

Im the nicest bastard... to inspire slackers, biters, jackers
Because i lock the topspot even if you write it backwards
^ Closer coulda been better nice wordplay but no diss

C.A.L.I's verse

Ya ficticious gimmics not hitting no chance yall rivet my verse
State loosely yous a Nas groupie from 'THA ROC'?man this is a first
^ good opener good personal and punch

Ya 'Flow' was 'Intelligent' now its bullshit irrelevant nonsense
Type fag like soldiers with white flags you scared to bomb vets
^ good punch nice flip off his name

Still slipping ya punches is missing like drunks in bar fights
Damn rookie you a gansta pussy = mag is a hard dike
^ aight punch

Got shooters behind ya computer?ya fucking interviews is hilliarious
Still riding on 'G's 'Balls'.........and i aint talking bout for$akens alias
^ lol good personal/punch

'Mind over body' what you mediatating?praying for saviours?
Damn lier now call in your dick riders tell um turn in they favors
^ good closer aight punch

Overall
As much as i don't want to say this for fear people will call me an Empire groupie...he did get this in my opinion...Flow your verse was aight but near the end it slipped and you finished it off with self-glory...you need to re-work how you go about laying out punches because it seems like your flow and structure is aight however your punches and personals seem to lack. Empire won this through sheer whoring to be honest not the best but the personals he used did good for his verse whereas you coulda used some and probably won this.

V/C.A.L.I There's my sig be sure to RTF
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