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I just don't give a fuck!
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IP:
Voted For: Phantom
v/ Phantom
Wall:
Phantom wack ass action clip, the ring you wore sucked dick
Cant Phathom how deep i get, when i say rip consider u blest
didn't rhyme..blah @ punch.
only way to get big is if i dissed n took ur PH and make an anthem...
phantoms crazy, turns ghost, patrick swayse 90s was best at most...
again..didn't rhyme... weak punch.
leave you crippled in ur tomb like a baby came out the ass instead of the womb...
signs shows suckered look at this toon
blah!!..at this structure
signs cant depict the mess after the ka-boom
i leave ya abstract like contact bone face to bruise and absent like atztec lay in rune...
blah!!
im the undertaker so expect the ur herse n shake the tombstone...
im the take you under so check ur verse n break the wishbone...
1st line was decent..but coulda bin worded better..punch=blah
Basically this wasn't a great verse...1st 4 lines didn't even rhyme.. and punches were weak.. weak attempt's at a personal on his name.. u need to concentrate and word ya shit better... try workin on creativity and try adding some wordplay and metas... work on ya punches.
Phantom:
.........Aw lord, everybody please believe this man is gay
......Think about it, his name says illness is only an a.k.a!
lol..nice.
...So what else do I gotta say to show how bad you are?
I'll have your voice box skippin 10x worse than ya avatar!
lol.
Plus heres a couple more punches that imma toss at you
Imma make this kid 'blow up' quicker than 'tall prostitues'!
meh.. but decent.
C'mon kid is basically known that you stand in my shadow
Say you from the West end...but its an 'L' in this battle!
good.
..Catch up bitch, basically beggin for you to get with me
.....My votes will make the "ties die" quicker than hippies!
dope wordplay.
Nice verse soc... Basically u ripped this kid with an average verse. nice personals on his name, avy and profile. that tie die punch was pretty creative. Phantom had an overall better verse.
lol @ u highlightin' and quotin' yer verse so rv kids would understand.
v/phantom
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