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Old 12-08-04, 03:54 PM   #6
Dok Holidae
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ok...how its goin down...
Pryronix had a ok opener nothin that actually did any damage to CB...Your vocab was better his though...ya had one good punch and rest was wack...the one about his sister was the good one...Ya structure was sloppy....ya flow was not bad but not good either...

ok..now CB ya opener ya where tryin to come with a personal and it was decent you need to elavate on that a lil...You need so span out ya vocab a lil more...Ya #2 was a ok punch..#4 was not bad...#5 was better than Pyron's punch...Ya structure both of yall need to work on a lil...And ya flow was just a tiny bit better than his...

V/CB......just because ya had more punches than him and ya flow was better...Both need to elavate...im out ~1~