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Old 12-08-04, 04:12 PM   #13
Nynth Degree
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Voted For: D Fury

ambient:
yer prewrites a bittin... so yer conect wit less then half a bite
any talent or style u hold deception, like clebarity look-a-likes
Weak opener, punch wasn't that hard
everyone looks upon u as low...the scum of a net emcee
coz ya title is bad, i wonder if u spit any wicked lines against me
Could've been worded better to make ther punch connect
honest to god this battle is fixed up...u aint even werth it
i'm sure my verse will be bought..but u'll be first to reserve it
Weak, on real punch here
ur dreams wont be fu-filled...so this battle is like a broken cup
to explained ya verses..like all ur gurls they need to be broken up
Bad closer also

Wicked One:
I spit verbs with haste to disburse your face...
This kid couldn't kick prolific shit if he had 66 more big words to say...
Stretched 2nd line, punch didn't really connect
Your skillz are unproved,and undetermined as far as existence...
My lyrics are the truth,Im make you switch ya name to Science-Fiction...
Punch wasn't hard at all here
Known to rip kids with a surgeons precision...
Sting you like a fluid thats acidic poured on an incision...
Ok punch...
Fast like a cheetah, take ya loss, act intelligently...
Cause you aint able to handle an ace like a card dealer wit a felony...
Ok punch again, verse is improving slightly...
Learn a lesson,cuz my wide-eyes can see that your fake...
Words push your wig back futher than Shynes sophmore release date
Decent closer, punch was aight

Winner: Wicked One, for harder punches. Although Wicked's structure was a little off, it wasn't that bad. Ambient, all you need is some elevation...

RTF at a link in my sig, honest explained votes only...
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