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Old 12-08-04, 09:20 PM   #10
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Voted For: Elemental Soul

Unlimited just reached his limit,like mice around an elephant,
Quit tryen,cuz you'll neva be visible,unlike snoop doggs skeleton,
^^okay puch coulda been more direct...
Stop playen yaself,cuz your like a guitar with no strings,
And you'll neva be "shining" even if u were stanley and king,
^^decent punch
Ya bitch ass is wrong, like holy water in a bong,
Your style reminds me of a bald man going in a hair salon,
^^kinda weak
This newbie cant spit,he's like a dead cock,
Cuz even if ya name is "Fred",you will never make the "bedrock",
^^lol played but nice cuz i aint seen it in a minute
And now for the fatality,what a tragedy for this asshole,
He got gassed up,like when the U.S. fucked with Castro,
^^lol nice punch

nice punches.......okay vocab..........god structure.........saw some multi's.......good flow..........coulda used more personals....6/10

holla at ur boy tha nine's cocked baretta aimed at ur dome
uzi da doozey dont fuck wit me u get dead by tha crome
^^weak punch
life aint all about violence and hate love does exist
like tha love i hav for tha girl u thought loved you, but life is a bitch
^^weak punch again
it would be best for you to kill urself mak my job lil bit easier
i'm tha death reeper killin dem fags u say u not but ur girl dont believe ya
^^weak punch
and thats sad over a month u shudda fucked or sumpthin
u spendin all ur bread on a bitch aparently for nuthin
^^okay punch
pussy da bitch set tha battle up elements dont mix with soul
u tha type of dude to put crisco in ur hair to make ur hair glo
^^weak attempt at a personal/punch

okay you came weak as no other man.................ya structure was off here and there........ya had no vocab...........ya punches didnt hit.....flow was okay..........multi attempts were weak........
3/10
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