Voted For: OptiKaL

voted for optikal because.............

optikal....you had some nice mataphors in your verse....punchlines killed him....nice multis.....the only thing wrong with your verse was that your structure is fucked......work on that and you will be a very good battler....overall a nice verse.....u hit harder

ebonics.....your verse was kind of simple...no multis...no vocab....meta's.......it was a decent verse but those are some of the things you should consider working on....no hate...


i voted for optik because...punches hit harder...he had more multis...metaphores were there....and overall his whole verse was just a lot nicer.....no hate to either one of you....good battle....

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