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Old 12-09-04, 12:42 AM   #6
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Voted For: Black Thief

ok heres the breakdown:

blackthief:

your verse was pretty good... decent multies good wordplay.. a nameplay that was decent.. punches were dope meta's were hot especially the opener.. ill put a piston to ya face but i aint talking bout wallace that was dope and the best bar of the battle.. gotta work on ya structure tho even the lines up

overall : 7.8/10

BL:

you had a decent verse the first 4 lines were extremely wack and werent directed at black thief they were like an open mic drop... nothing was against him.. you had better flow than black thief but you lacked in every other area... focus on punches and personals more... you had some decent wordplay but your structure needs work also so try fixing that up

overall : 4.9/10

vote: black thief

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