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Better than you..
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i liked this...sounds like u writing with a passion for graffiti yourself. flowed well, good structure, creativity was also pretty good. the only thing lacking in my eyes is that i think it would have been good to make some political statements about the use of public space and security, shit like that would have been good to add in but this was still a pretty good read regardless. nice shit.
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..ADLIB..
Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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