20/20 VisioN
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IP:
enygmas caught my attention, sdizzle u had a OWNAGE opener, then it just seemed to fall off, most of ur lines were just played and wack, but ok, seemed like u didnt put much thought into it, which i dont understand.. expecially if u want to WIN.... anywayz
enygma had better word play ( S scents.. NICE)
just overall much betta structure and use of words and metaphores
elevate DIZZLE jesus, but god job to both
HONEST FEEDBACK
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da916_nigga: ima slap it right now
kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs
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