Thread: This Piano
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Old 12-09-04, 01:39 PM   #4
~Lady Fiya~
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I responded to another piece of your poetry before... you have a nice way with words.. and the flow of this piece was on point and kinda blunt.. more of a straight forward piece.. i made a poem called My Piano a while back, and i mentioned ebony and ivory as metaphors, when i seen these lines:
"Can black and white really work like that? Or is this just a fake?"..
"For living where I grow up, a piano and people can't relate"..
For his own sake he debated with himself over this reason for days..
Black and white keys working together? He was just so amazed..
^i went back for a moment on my piece.. i'm kinda shocked that no one has responded to this.. i was feeling it fa real.. stay up..
Lady Fiya
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